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Friday, May 31, 2019

earth science.

Hi,

I am shearing wife you my earth science.

My sedimentary rock was made out of  sand and water plaster of pairs wife a little bit of  of color but when we got it out of its box that we put it in it was not. After a week later we Smart it on the concrete to see all the layers. It broke in its layers. I made my one with Sam.

Can i have feedback Thank you for reading.
Goodbye.

3 comments:

  1. Hello Samuel.
    I liked how you looked at the camera and showed us the inside of what your rock looked like,when you broke it.I never did cool activities like this when I went to Primary School.
    Maybe next time you are being videoed,don't move away from the camera and talk.Wait until you are in front of the camera as it was a bit hard to hear what you were saying.
    Well done on your rock.

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  2. Hi Samuel!
    You were so confident and informative with what you were saying on your video! I loved how you started your video with a greeting and finished it with a goodbye and also showed up close what your rock looked like! Have you shown this video to your friends and family? If I had made a video as informative as this I would be very proud of it. I hope you are too!

    :) Miss D

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  3. Hi Samuel

    I can see you enjoyed learning about different types of rocks,your video was informative, well done and keep up the good blogging

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