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Thursday, December 5, 2019

getting to the top

hi everyone welcome.

I well be shearing with you my e.o.t.c that is were you go on multiple activities.
I will show what I did in e.o.t.c

We did Port Hills walk I was at the back but then me and my friend go to the top of the line as we did we pass all of our other friends then we got to the end of the line we stop then turn and go back to the start and we were not going to give up and then we pass all of are friends aging.When we got back to the car park the was a playground so I played tic tak toe with my friends.

Goodbye. Maybe you could try going on a Port hills walk

1 comment:

  1. Hi Kian here I really like how you explained everything you did, maybe next time you could use commas in your story as well.

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