Hi guys. I have made a broken city on paint 3D and you can only get it on windows 10. First make a sea then make a island then the city. Its broken by a meteor that hit the city. Then monsters comes out from meteor. Can i have feedback on what I could add.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, June 27, 2019
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Hi Samuel.
ReplyDeleteI really like your island/city. I wish we had this technology when I was younger, that way I could understand technology more and not look like such a goose when I ask questions.
Maybe next time just remember to use punctuation in your work.
I am just curious,are there any sharks in the sea?